How to Write Relatable Asexual and Aromantic Characters
Image description: Merida from Pixar's Brave is, in my opinion, about as relatable a non-romantic, non-sexual character as they come. Her crazy hair and constant facepalming are 100% a mood, but even more than that, in her we see a character with flaws who makes mistakes, who wants things, who learns and grows, and who does it all without losing her AroAce tendencies. In today's post, I explore examples of how to write "relatable" aspec characters and give my opinion on tips for success. |
I’m sure anyone who ever had a writing or grammar class in school has heard this sentiment or something similar: “‘said’ is dead.” It’s a phrase that encourages writers to use something other than “said” when writing dialogue, emphasizing the idea that the word is overused. While there are definitely some problems that can arise by saying any overused word is “dead,” I’m sure there are words used in media that many of us likewise feel are frustratingly overused to the point of no longer having meaning. If you tend to analyze female characters in media, one such word that can feel played out is “strong.” For me, in my own analysis, I tend to wonder if I’m doing something similar every time I refer to a character as “relatable.”
In everyday speech, I often find myself saying things like
“I feel that,” or using “relatable” to mean things that strike a chord in the
moment. But when it comes to creating non-sexual or non-romantic characters,
what does it mean to have them be “relatable”? This idea will inevitably mean
different things to different aspec and arospec people who have diverse stories
and experiences they long to see reflected in characters. However, I think it’s
a good general rule to consider a “relatable” character someone who has flaws
as well as strengths, who is compelling enough to follow for the entire length
of a work, and whose struggles teach us something deep and meaningful about
ourselves. This is important for characters of any kind, but when it comes to
ace and aro characters, these things take on a whole new meaning – especially
when other characters and plot are added to the mix.
As always, these are just my opinions, reflective of my own
experiences as an AroAce writer and someone who yearns for better
representation in media. I hope these examples will serve as good starting
points for thinking about what complex experiences might look like in your
stories, and will encourage writers and media consumers of all kinds to keep
exploring what would make a good story.
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Creating “complex”
characters
Another overplayed word alert! This is another one of those
terms like “strong” that kind of feels like it has no meaning. What does it
mean to be “complex?” Or what makes a character’s life, experiences, or
personality “complex?” Perhaps a better way to say this is “multi-faceted” –
like real people, they should have a lot going on under the surface. As I
mentioned in my “Do’s and Don’t’s” post, any good character is more than just
one thing, and that’s true of ace and/or aro characters too. For many of us on
the spectrum, our identities are a huge part of what make us who we are, and
how we conceptualize the world is of course colored by that fact. But we also have
so much that makes us who we are other than just being on the aromantic or
asexual spectrums. These things will often go hand in hand (the way being
AroAce and a geek does for me), and when you explore that in your characters, it
makes them seem more authentic and real.
Two good examples are the respective protagonists of two ace
books I reviewed for the blog previously – Alice of Let’s Talk About Love and
Tash from Tash Hearts Tolstoy. Although both Alice and Tash’s stories are
heavily about them discovering/exploring their identities, there is a lot that
makes both protagonists feel like real individuals. Whether it’s Alice’s love
of food, Tash’s love of Tolstoy, their respective geekiness, the unique family
situations both young women are living through, drama with their friends, or
what have you, there is a lot going on in their lives. Some of this is
independent of their ace identities and some of it is interwoven – for instance,
both of them feel a sense of alienation in their peer groups because they know
they don’t see the world like all of their friends do, but they also struggle
with things like their friends moving away or going to colleges where their
friends won’t also be. These issues therefore can run on parallel tracks,
creating situations with great depth that feel like looking at a painting that
has multiple layers of images to create the illusion of distance. Creating
characters whose experiences appeal not just to the aspec-ness of a person, but
also to their basic humanity is the key to good representation, because it
shows aspec people are more than the limiting and one-sided tropes that we often
see sprinkled throughout media.
But of course, part of giving a character dimension includes
giving them flaws as well as strengths. This means giving them things they are
bad at, but also giving them moments where they are wrong. Maybe they get into
trouble or make a bad decision or let their emotions run away with them; I know
I’ve done all of those things in my life, and I’m sure the same can be said
about everybody. Therefore, a good and realistic character will be able to say
the same thing.
When it comes to giving a character flaws, I think the tendency
is to either give a character no flaws or very few flaws out of the fear that
they will be tarnished, or else overcompensate and give them too many flaws to
the point of becoming unlikeable. Again, “unlikeable” will mean different
things to different people, so it’s impossible to have a formula that will
automatically give your character a good balance of traits; not to mention the
idea of flaws changes depending on character, story, and setting. But in the
case of writing ace or aro characters, there are certain things that are used
in media as a shorthand for “unlikeable” that are used against non-romantic and
non-sexual character specifically, and thus it is a good idea to try to avoid some
of those things.
When I did my analysis of aphobic tropes in media, something
I tended to see a lot was that the non-sexual and non-romantic characters I was
analyzing seemed to be portrayed as bizarre or unlikeable on purpose.
The media they are in often went out of its way to demonstrate these characters
are rude, eccentric, cold, etc. Obviously, there is nothing wrong with writing
characters who exhibit these traits, even aromantic or asexual characters; however,
media often seems to claim that these traits and the character’s ace or aro
tendencies go together, and that these are all bad traits that should (and
probably will) be changed. But when the goal is to create good representation, it
is far better to create characters whose experiences are allowed to be valid
and whose lives contain depth that is well-explored throughout the story. It is
okay to give your character flaws and even have that character work to change
them, but their identity should not be portrayed as one of those flaws.
Learning to be more kind, for instance, should not automatically mean that a
character now knows how to love and can have a romantic relationship.
Image description: Writing non-sexual or non-romantic characters with flaws = good; making these same characters purposely problematic = bad. Sheldon from The Big Bang Theory often feels like an example of the latter, and often falls victim to many of the aphobic tropes you should avoid when trying to write respectful and thoughtful ace or aro characters. |
Perhaps the most important thing about giving your character some flaws is that these flaws should work to make them more well-rounded and thus should make their story more interesting. There should be moments where these flaws get in the way of what they want or where their own perception of their flaws presents a challenge. Earlier in this post, I mentioned that a good character is a character “compelling” enough to follow through the whole story, and by that I mean we should care about them and what happens to them. We should be rooting for them to get what they want and to succeed. These things are true of any story that has good characters, but when it comes to stories about aspec characters that aspec people will likely be reading in the hopes of finding something to identify with, it becomes especially important. For that reason, “relatable” ace characters can often be more accurately defined as “identifiable” – a character whose struggle feels authentic to an experience that real ace and/or aro people might go through and whose behaviors feel like genuine reflections of those experiences. This allows you to create characters who don’t always act perfectly in every situation (just like a real person), but whose pathos is explored all the same.
For example, something I really appreciated about Tash in Tash
Hearts Tolstoy was that she sometimes had bad knee-jerk reactions to moments where
her friends unknowingly made jokes she took offense to. For instance, when one
of her best friends refers to her and her internet crush as “voice virgins”
because they’ve never spoken to each other in person, Tash gets palpably irked
at the use of the word “virgin,” since her friends know she is asexual. The
important part of this moment with Tash is that we as the reader can see why
she’s upset and her friends can too (there are other moment in the novel that I
feel don’t use that tactic as effectively, but that’s neither here nor there). Tash’s
moment of annoyance and the discomfort she feels in situations like this one are
extremely identifiable as struggles I myself have gone through, and I’m sure I’m
not alone in that.
This example ties in nicely to the next point I would like
to make about what struggles ace and aro characters go through and how they
should be explored. What struggles are “relatable” or “identifiable” from an aspec
perspective? And how can these struggles be explored in ways that don’t diminish
non-sexual or non-romantic characters, but rather can elevate them and help
contribute to representation in positive ways?
How your characters
struggle is important
I once saw a simple breakdown that plot is what happens when
your characters encounter conflict, but I’m sure some of you may have seen more
complicated breakdowns. There’s the rising action-falling action plot chart,
the different types of conflict (i.e. – man vs. man, man vs. nature, man vs.
self, etc.), the basic idea that a story must have a beginning, a middle, and
end, although not necessarily in that order, so on and so forth. I’m not a
creative writing teacher (or any kind of teacher for that matter), so my goal
with this post is not to teach you what method you should follow to structure
your plot; however, I do want to bring up what I think is an essential part of making
good aromantic or asexual representation, and that is considering how your
characters encounter conflict and what it means for their identity.
Whether you are writing a story where the character’s aspec
identity is the focal point or just a part of who they are that functions within
the larger narrative, this issue is an important one. When your characters come
up against other characters, how does their identity affect these encounters,
if at all? How does their life philosophy mesh or not mesh with those around
them and what does that mean for them? And if their identity is the driving
factor of the plot, what conflicts does that bring up and how do they navigate
them? In my opinion, the answer to all of these questions is that your
character’s identity should be validated – not at the expense of other people’s
identities or experiences, but as a part of the overall narrative you are
weaving.
For instance, occasionally your characters may (and probably
will) come up against people who don’t accept them, or situations where they
feel uncomfortable. This is a very identifiable issue that many people within asexual
and aromantic communities can related to. Thus, how your character approaches
the situation has a tremendous opportunity to provide an identifiable scenario
that aspec people will see and recognize. There is nothing wrong with
portraying situations in which your ace or aro characters encounter push back
and have to struggle through it, but it’s the way that they and people around
them react that is the true test of representation. Is that character able to
change the mind of the person who is unaccepting of them? Does a moment of
confrontation on the subject lead to them cutting a toxic relationship out
their life? Does it bring them an epiphany that leads to greater self-love or self-acceptance?
These are all good questions to ask yourself. Seeing characters rise above
aphobia in ways that feel attainable is a great element of representation.
On the other hand, you can also create a world that acts as
a safe space, where ace and aro characters are accepted without question by
those around them, but you choose to give them struggles in other areas. The important
part is that their struggles – whatever they may be – should not cause them to
lose who they are. Life may be hard or they may go through things that make
them feel hopeless, but the best asexual representation is that which offers a
glimmer of hope that there are better things waiting.
Additionally, be mindful of how other characters interact
with your character. If part of your aspec character’s struggle is that people
around them don’t understand them but you still want those characters to be
likeable, maybe include moments where they and your aspec character have in-depth
meaningful discussions. If you want to include characters who mock and dismiss the
aspec character, the wisest course of action will be to show that this
character is wrong to do that. You don’t have to necessarily demonize them, but
they should not be the one who wins. In order to make relatable struggles that
contribute in positive ways to asexual and aromantic representation, I highly
recommend giving your ace and aro characters the ability to come out of any
conflicts they go through with a net gain rather than a net loss.
Different world?
No problem!
Anyone who is a fan of science fiction, fantasy, or
historical pieces will tell you that part of the charm of these genres is the
ability to find characters we can identify with despite the fantastic settings
of these stories. The same thing is true when it comes to ace and aro
characters in these genres. Despite the fact that they may exist in settings
where words like “aspec,” “asexual,” or “aromantic” don’t exist, there are
still plenty of things that writers can do to give us the idea that these
characters have aspec tendencies.
Even without the terminology to guide you, so many of the
things discussed so far can apply to these types of characters and settings as
well. This is something I will bring up in my next ace book review, as that story takes place in a fantasy setting, and it’s also something that was very
relevant when I reviewed the book Archivist Wasp. The story takes place in a
dystopian future world where, as the author herself says, the main character
Wasp has no concept of terms like “aromantic” or “asexual.” However, the author
also makes it clear that sex and romance are not something Wasp considers at
all and, although terminology is never used in the narrative, Wasp’s behaviors feel
like they point to that.
In fact, even if you never once have your character identify
as non-sexual or non-romantic, there are many things you can do or bits of
characterization you can employ within your fantasy or sci-fi setting that will
be identifiable. For instance, you can have a character who feels alone because
they don’t see the world as others do, or who doesn’t feel included among
people who are romantic or sexual. Perhaps they are forced to endure criticism
because of this, or are mocked for it. Their struggles with these things should
follow the same guidelines I just discussed in the previous section and will be
just as relatable even without the terminology. For example, if you set your story
in a dystopian world where the human population is under threat, an aromantic
asexual character – even one not identified as such in the narrative – might be
seen as selfish or even dangerous by their peers, and exploring their struggle
will likely still be identifiable for many ace and/or aro people who might be
chastised for the same thing in real life.
But when it comes to writing aspec or arospec characters in sci-fi
and fantasy, there is one element I would like to touch on briefly. Earlier I
mentioned the struggle to not make your characters unlikeable and mentioned that
oftentimes media will purposely portray non-romantic or non-sexual characters
as bizarre and lacking basic human understanding. Once again, I find myself
considering the question of non-human characters being aspec, because this
exact issue is part of the reason why it can be such a slippery slope
portraying non-humans as on the asexual or aromantic spectrums. Quite
frequently, these characters are already portrayed in media as being inherently
separated from the “human experience” and their lack of sexual and/or romantic
relationships is often portrayed as part of that.
Despite this, there are some non-human characters that I
think could be excellent ace and/or aro representation, despite not being human
(my sweet spirit son Cole from Dragon Age: Inquisition comes to mind,
for instance). Other non-human characters I’ve discussed in the past – such as
Data from Star Trek: The Next Generation or The Doctor from Star
Trek: Voyager – have stories and struggles that are often explored within
their respective shows, and the fact that they are not human and thus different
from everyone else around them is important to their characters. While the
media these characters are in often tosses aside exploring potential asexual or
aromantic tendencies in favor of stories where they conform, the characters
themselves can nevertheless serve as good starting points to see how to craft a
well-rounded non-human character, and the places where they fall into aphobic
tropes can be learned from to improve for the future.
I generally tend to believe that, at this point in the
journey to get more aromantic and asexual representation in media, I would much
rather see human characters exploring their identities. But I also believe
that, if non-human ace and aro characters are a must for the story or setting,
the same guidelines apply for them as apply for human characters. Whether your
character is of a fantasy race or is a robot/android/alien/whatever in a sci-fi
universe, it is never a bad idea to explore who they are, what they want, and
what experiences color their life and opinions. If asexual or aromantic
tendencies are a part of that, they can be explored in ways that encourage readers
to expand their horizons.
For instance, maybe you have a member of an asexual alien
race that wants to be respected by humans despite their difference in culture.
Or perhaps you have an aromantic robot who wants to experience human
relationships, but to them that means friendship exclusively. Whatever scenario
you dream up, make sure it is one that treats non-sexual and/or non-romantic characters as valid, unique, and
complicated individuals with wants, dreams, flaws, and fears like any other
person or character in media.
Image caption: Although I have tremendous issues with Data the android's "emotion chip" in Star Trek: Generations, I will always love the scene where he cries (yellow) tears of joy when he finds his cat Spot alive. In general, I'd love to see less stories about non-human AroAces finding romance, and more stories about them, for instance, finding furry companions. But this is just one example of something one ace person finds super relatable. |
As I said at the beginning of this post, there are so many
diverse people and experiences that make up the mosaics of the aspec and
arospec communities that one character cannot possibly hope to represent them
all. And it is for exactly that reason why more widespread representation is so
desperately needed. A handful of stories are amazing, and so much better than
we had before. But dozens of stories across all kinds of platforms? That level
of detailed and dedicated storytelling, when done right, has tremendous
potential to make a huge positive impact in the lives of countless people on
both the asexual and aromantic spectrums.
It’s not surprising that so many stories continue to reproduce negative tropes about aspec characters; when these are the only examples we tend to see in popular media, it becomes difficult to break the mold. But regardless of medium, asexual and aromantic representation is important, and by learning how to write good aspec characters, I think we can start to see visibility for these communities increase little and little everyday. Good stories are the platform in which people of all kinds can explore themselves and figure out how the world works; it is the stage we use to explore and play out life’s big questions. And, if Shakespeare was right that all the world is a stage and all the people are players, I hope that more players from across the aromantic and asexual spectrums can join the production as well.
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